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PostSubject: Mikaboshi justu   10th March 2013, 10:31 pm

Name: Bow of Creation Arrows of Damnation
Classification: Ninjutsu/ Kyujutsu
Rank: S-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long

Description: This is a special archery style made by Mujin, focusing on the primary elements which constitute their Shadow release and thread release. The user first creates a powerful war bow made out of Thread release which has bladed edges made out of Shadows which can be used to fuel shadow release techniques, it also has a durable chakra string which serves as the tension for firing arrows. Once created it is permanent unless broken by a S-rank rank attack and no longer carries over into new topics. The user of this archery style actually gathers air and uses it as ammunition making this technique very useful as each arrow merely requires a D-rank amount of chakra to gather and fire however the advanced variants unique to this arrow require a B-rank per arrow, for the advanced arrows unique to this bow Mujin uses more Chakra while mixing his chakra and others releases with the arrows. There are three final variants of arrows which can be released from this bow in addition to the 7 preceding ones from the weaker versions of this bow: * First, the Sonic arrow which travels at A rank speeds dealing A rank damage while gradually accumulating more and more speed the farther the target is causing the arrow to move one rank higher in speed every 10 meters it travels* Second the damnation arrow, This arrow increases the effectiveness of all attacks and decreases the effectiveness of all incoming attacks by a maximum of 3 ranks. 1 rank for each arrow that is deflected or blocked lasting until the user or now is destroyed or until the topic ends.
*Third the Tornado arrow which is the only defensive arrow type and moves at normal running speed however its true purpose is its ability to knock back S-rank and below offensive techniques right back towards the originator as well as knock animate and inanimate objects flying back 50 feet upon contact.


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PostSubject: Re: Mikaboshi justu   12th March 2013, 3:40 pm

Well lets start at the more obvious ones here.

It can not, as it stands now, be carried over into other topics. Its a bow formed of chakra, there for has to be recreated each topic. That being said, to create the bow would drain an S rank amount of chakra.

Second problem here is the bow should be broken by equal rank tech, not a rank higher. If a nature that is good against thread is used it would only take an A rank attack to break it.

With the three arrows you have here, it should cost at the very least a B rank of chakra per arrow. Further than that, explain what is the difference between a basic arrow and an advance arrow. Is it the chakra type used?

Sonic arrow should be moved back to increase 1 rank every 10m not 10ft. 10ft is still nearly point blank range and should be able to gain power that close of range.

The second arrow that bursts into hundreds of other arrows needs a bit of a change. This attack is formed by all most pure chakra and as such, the hundreds of arrows its formed by are composed of chakra. They would just be wind chakra. To have something use physical wind, it would need move of a physical nature. Like a taijutsu attack that bursts wind out a very short range, or an arrow that kind of cause a slicing vacume in its wake. Those type of things would be actual wind where as your arrow exploding into hundreds of other arrows would have to be chakra based. In addition, I'm not going to allow you to launch hundreds of arrows, all completely invisible either.

The third arrow I'm fairly ok with.
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PostSubject: Re: Mikaboshi justu   12th March 2013, 4:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mikaboshi justu   13th March 2013, 10:16 am

mmk getting better as is. First arrow is ok now and I can deal with the bow as now too.

Second arrow I have a small deal with. Not really wanting to changing it at all, but just add in a clearification that the changes are done ONLY to the person who blocks the arrow.
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PostSubject: Re: Mikaboshi justu   14th March 2013, 2:44 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mikaboshi justu   14th March 2013, 7:02 pm

mmk approved
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PostSubject: Re: Mikaboshi justu   3rd April 2013, 11:41 am

Name: Hidden Ceberus Genjustu Style
Classification: Genjusdtu
Rank:S-rank
Class: Passive
Range:Self

Description: Mujin has formed a new way for the average Mikaboshi to perform Genjustu simply by using shadow release intertwined with Genjustu. The user focuses chakra throughout their body doing the normal preparation for the Gen being used, Using this technique the user now can place Gen in new ways. First off the user gains a cloak off shadows around their body the cloak if looked upon catches opponents in gen although using this way the gen is one rank lower it is still usefull. The second way mujin can cast gen is through burst off chakra from his tenkestu's aimed at specific oppenen catching opponents in the gen when they come in to contact with the chakra. If the user uses D rank Gen they can shoot a 10 blast at D rank and moving up 15 feet each Rank the blast moves and causes damage equal to rank off the genjustu used, Gen used with this style cost one rank less
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