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PostSubject: Laxus's Techniques WIP   10th October 2013, 11:18 pm

Name: Bone Tree Garden
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This is a separate garden that now allows Laxus to store bone tree plant types. This technique creates a pocket dimension that, when sealed, transfers the trees into the dimension in which it enters stasis.  All trees, no matter what stage of growth they're at, are sealed at that same growth stage and do not require nutrients to survive while in the pocket dimension.   This allows the user to create multiple amounts of seeds/trees over a period of time stocking up for when they would need them in battle.
Number of Trees that can be held:
Apple: 10
Cactus: 10

Name: Bone Shrub Garden
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This is a separate garden that now allows Laxus to store bone shrub plant types. This technique creates a pocket dimension that, when sealed, transfers the shrubs into the dimension in which it enters stasis.  All trees, no matter what stage of growth they're at, are sealed at that same growth stage and do not require nutrients to survive while in the pocket dimension.   This allows the user to create multiple amounts of seeds/shrubs over a period of time stocking up for when they would need them in battle.

Name: Bone Vine Garden
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This is a separate garden that now allows Laxus to store bone vine plant types. This technique creates a pocket dimension that, when sealed, transfers the vines into the dimension in which it enters stasis.  All trees, no matter what stage of growth they're at, are sealed at that same growth stage and do not require nutrients to survive while in the pocket dimension.   This allows the user to create multiple amounts of seeds/vines over a period of time stocking up for when they would need them in battle.  

Name: Apple Bone Seed
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This technique takes a C-rank blood price initially, then another C-rank blood price for it to grow into Bone Apple Tree.  The tree will begin to develop clear bone apples.  One can additionally have their victim ingest the bone apple seed and upon entering their body it sticks to their stomach lining while draining a D-rank of blood each of the victims posts until it get's enough to reach maturity after which it kills the opponent by rapidly growing while the remnants of their blood is sucked in through the roots of the tree. These seeds upon being ingested must be cut out of the victims body otherwise they remain inside the host body until maturation.

Name: Apple Bone Tree
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Upon feeding an A-rank amount of blood into the fully grown Bone Apple Tree, the tree matures.  When it matures, with the price of an A-rank amount of blood, the tree is able to take bodies (or living people if they're unlucky enough) and wrap them up in its roots.  It will then begin sucking that person dry and storing their blood in the hanging apples.  Each apple can hold a B-rank amount of blood which can then be eaten by Laxus to gain back blood used in techniques.  The tree itself can hold a max of an SS-rank amount of blood before its' apples are all full

Name: Cactus Bone Seed
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This technique takes a C-rank blood price initially, then another B-rank blood price for it to grow into a cactus bone tree. When fully grown, the cactus can then be given another A-rank amount of blood to reach full maturity. The seeds are able to be thrown and upon impact engorge before exploding releasing 10 needles which travel at crashing ground speeds to deal D-rank damage each.

Name: Cactus Bone Tree
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Once reaching maturity, the cactus becomes covered in senbon sized bone spikes, just like a normal cactus.  When it matures the cactus's points are able to be fired at speeds equal to the amount of blood that is then funneled into it (C-S rank blood price).  When matured, the bone spike tips are tinged slightly red and upon hitting someone will inject them with a poison.  This poison will cause their bone's to grow outward in jagged spikes, and begin protruding from the skin.  This is a very painful process that takes 30 posts (total) before the effected dies.  

Name: Apple Bone Bomb
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close-Mid

Description: Laxus can pluck bone apples from his trees and instead of drinking the blood to replenish his own reserves, he can break the apple which quickly turns the blood into a gaseous form.  A red mist spreads out in a twenty foot area of the broken apple and anyone that inhales while in this red mist will be infected.  Once infected, it takes 30 posts (total) for the target to succumb to the effects of blood poisoning and can only be healed by a B-rank or higher medical technique that specifically deals with poisons or replacing blood.  

Name: Cross Breed Bone Plants
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: S-SSS
Class:  Supplementary
Range: Close

Description: Laxus has developed a sealing method that allows him to combine different plants at will.  Say he wants a Rose Bone mine that explodes but instead releases the noxious fumes and poisons of his Apple Bone fruits.  Well, now he can do that.  The hybrid plants are just like any other plant and require the blood prices of both plants combined to grow and mature.  S-rank version mixes 2 plants, SS-rank version mixes 3 plants and SSS-rank version mixes 5 plants.

Name: Divergent Chakra Strings
Classification: Kugujutsu
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: This technique is just like a regular puppeteer's chakra strings however, Laxus has developed a way for the strings to come out of his fingers and diverge so they can connect to more puppets.  This allows him to control 3 puppets with just 1 finger, freeing up his other hand to activate seals and use his bone plants.  

Name: Dandelion Bone Seed
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: The dandelion bone seed requires a B-rank of blood to create and then a D-rank to grow.  The seed itself is able to draw in a max of C-rank chakra based technique before it is destroyed, protecting Laxus.  With another B-rank   

Name: Dandelion Bone Flower
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description:  When it matures (at the price of another B-rank), the flower is simply a bone-white dandelion with red spores for a flower and requires at least a C-rank technique to be destroyed.  Once matured, the plant grows greatly(about 6 feet with the flower having a radius of 3 feet).  This plant can then draw in any can draw in a blood/water/Earth based chakra based or kinjutsu attack B-rank and below before replicating based on the rank of the technique D-rank = 1 dandelion C-rank 2, B-rank 3, A-rank its destroyed without leaving spores but blocks the attack in the process.


Chimera Ants

Name: Green Reflection Order
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: B-S
Class: Defensive
Range: Self/Close

Description: Using this technique, Laxus commands all of the green ants in his hive to begin vibrating.  This generates a barrier of vibration just around Laxus (about an inch away from him).  These vibrations resonate at such a level that they can completely block physical and chakra based techniques equal and below Laxus's own rank.  Not only do they block the techniques, but they can also reflect them back at the user.  Laxus can only use this technique 5 times in rapid succession as a Tobetsu Jonin before his ants become tired and must rest for 5 more posts.  With each rank up he gains 5 more posts, capping out at 15 for Sannin.  Laxus can also order his ants to vibrate when they are on his bone plants, thus giving them the same protection offered to him.  

Name: Green Shiver Order
Classification: Kinjutsu/Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Using this technique, Laxus orders the Green Chimera Ants in his sword arm to vibrate.  These vibrations channel to Scarlet Rose and very minutely cause the blade to vibrate as well.  With the blade vibrating at such a high frequency, it gains an increase in cutting power, making all of Laxus's kenjutsu techniques 1-rank higher when used in conjunction with this technique.  

Name: Green Tremble Order
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C-SS
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close

Description: Laxus commands his ants to form a ring around a target and begin vibrating.  With the vibrations all focused on one area, they result in keeping the target locked in place if their speed is equal to the ant's speed or below.  This is particularly useful with Laxus's Bone Forest line of techniques as he no longer has to kill his targets before being able to harvest their blood. This technique can be used a total of 3 times in a row before the ants must return to Laxus to rest (for 3 posts). With each rank up it increases by 3 posts, capping at 9.


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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   15th October 2013, 9:01 pm

Bone Flower Forest split it into sections.
Bone Tree Garden (A)
Bone Shrub Garden (A)
Bone Vine Garden (B)
Also include limits for the various types of plants similar to Bone Flower Garden.
You can make an SS-rank Version which is Bone Plant Forest which includes all of them, eventually make a sealing matrix which involves feeding blood to multiple plants of the same species at once through it and thus cut back costs of feeding but yeah you'll still need to have multiple sections and have limits for each plant type no getting around that.

Apple Bone Seed -> Apple Bone Tree - Apple Bone Bomb
B -> S - A
Blood Price
C-rank to sprout, C-rank to grow into Apple Bone Tree.
A-rank to grow to maturity, A-rank for ensnaring victims - Each Apple Bone Tree can hold an SS-rank amount of blood total apples store a B-rank amount of blood number = to total amount of blood stored in the tree.

Cactus Bone Seed -> Cactus Bone Tree
A -> S
Blood Price
C-rank to sprout - B-rank to grow to Cactus Bone Tree
C-A-rank to feed so needles can be released at a max of vacuum release speeds. A-rank to grow to full maturity bone spike "poison" = 30 posts (total) before bone spikes burst from the victims skin.

Cross Breed Bone Plants S-SSS - Cross breeds take the combined blood price needed to germinate the seeds of both of the plants involved in the mixture. S-rank version mixes 2 plants, SS-rank version mixes 3 plants and SSS-rank version mixes 5 plants. Include the Hybrid Seeds as techniques as well.

Divergent Puppet Strings Approved - This won't allow you to control more than your slot maximum however just a heads up it just lets you control the puppets with one hand rather than both.

Dandelion Bone Seed - Dandelion Bone Flower
C - A
B-rank to grow D-rank to mature into Dandelion Bone Flower. Can draw in a C-rank chakra based technique before it's destroyed without release spores.
B-rank of blood to fully mature can draw in a blood/water/Earth based chakra based or kinjutsu attack B-rank and below before replicating based on the rank of the technique D-rank = 1 dandelion C-rank 2, B-rank 3, A-rank its destroyed without leaving spores but blocks the attack in the process.

^ ---- Major Problem of yours for all those above, you make them low rank, low rank means they are destroyed easily, your rank is the durability of them, Also you don't separate them, the focus of Wing's technique line is Seed - Actual Plant - Advanced version. The Seed itself is a weapon you just jump straight to the plant in addition watch the ranks of stuff poisons and fumes which affect things in 10 posts (total) seriously? that's SS easy, S-rank is 15 posts (total), A-rank 20 posts (total) B-rank 30 posts (total), C-rank 40 (total) etc. Edit that accordingly.

The Basis of Bone Garden is germinating the seeds over time storing them and using them in combat while utilizing the opponents blood to create more seeds or use them as hosts for more blood based techniques. A lot of the time you will be hunting down creatures to feed your plants, once you've grown them you store them for future use that is what your going to be doing.

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   16th October 2013, 2:12 pm

Edited them, time for round 2.  Probably gonna have a problem with the seeds because you said "those are weapons too" but I have no idea how from your descriptions soooo yeah >.>

Until I actually make more trees, shrubs, and vines, I'm going to leave out how many the gardens can hold. Once I make them, I'll ask you a proper number they should be able to hold of each type and update the techs accordingly. Mmk?

EDIT: Added in some Ant techs too
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   16th October 2013, 7:18 pm

A common use for giving seeds offensive capabilities are for instance. One can additionally have their victim ingest the bone apple seed and upon entering their body it sticks to their stomach lining while draining a D-rank of blood each of the victims posts until it get's enough to reach maturity after which it kills the opponent by rapidly growing while the remnants of their blood is sucked in through the roots of the tree. These seeds upon being ingested must be cut out of the victims body otherwise they remain inside the host body until maturation.

Cactus Bone Seed weapon use, instead of the blood being used to mature the tree you can have the seeds be able to be thrown and upon impact engorge before exploding releasing 10 needles which travel at crashing ground speeds to deal D-rank damage. Can be useful if you target sensitive areas like eyes, open mouths, open wounds the like and have the thin needles break unless pulled out gently without the use of strength tiers.

Dandelion already has it's ability but you left out what it takes for the seed to grow into the flower.

The Green Ant techniques are fine cept for their ranks when you have rank up techniques they are supposed to be ranked up with your rank so seeing as your a T.Jonin they can't be C-ranks but rather B-ranks but since they are 1-rank above your rank in protection then it should be A-SS rank for each of them. Otherwise? Why don't you make them fixed rank.

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   16th October 2013, 8:47 pm

Changed the Cactus seeds to be like what you said. Apple seeds...something tells me people aren't just going to voluntarily eat the seeds, especially since apple seeds are poisonous and that's not totally suspicious or anything.

Dandelion I don't know what you're talking about...well the seeds don't have it but the flower says what it takes to mature.

As for green ants, I changed the first one so it's equal to his rank and made it B-S
The second one has nothing to do with his ranks so I left that at C-rank
The final one doesn't have to do with Laxus's rank at all but the ant's rank instead so I kept that at C-SS.
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   16th October 2013, 10:55 pm

Apple Bone Seed, hence why you force feed them? Can even do it mid combat, pop it into their mouth while they are speaking or opening their mouth in preparation for a jutsu, it'll mainly be useful on creatures and the like because they roar and call and etc. Just add it =.=

Tremble Order give it a number of times it can be used before they get tired preferably 3 with + 3 per rank up.

Once all of that is done. Everything will be available for approval.
Keep in mind Chimera Ant stuff all go on the basis of cooldown and the like not to mentions your ants can be killed, thus lowering the overall count so if say you send a clump for reflection Order they get destroyed before they can get back to your body to rest, and now your overall count is lowered by 1. Likewise if they are kept occupied the cool down won't start until they get back into your body. Some stuff won't require a cool down aka the ones where they are on your body or are in contact with stuff your holding and the like and I'm sure you'll figure out a way to have them be able to retreat to their nests on the trees for resting places as well so it isn't so bad of a drawback for you in comparison to the usual Chimera Ant user.

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   16th October 2013, 11:02 pm

Mmk everything is fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   17th October 2013, 12:57 am

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   24th October 2013, 11:45 am

Name: Black Enflame Order
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: B (C-rank Blood Price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: With this technique, Laxus covers his sword hand with black chimera ants.  The ants then transmit their flames to Scarlet Rose (or whatever weapon Laxus is holding).  These flames now make it so Laxus's Kenjutsu techniques deal physical and spiritual damage equal to the rank of the technique he is using in conjunction with the flames.  

Name: Black Tornado Order
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Laxus directs a dozen or so of his black chimera ants to travel out and circle the target.  They cause the flames of their bodies to enrage and create a ring of fire around the target which converges on the target and deals A-rank spiritual damage, if hit this will leave B-rank burns that deal spiritual damage each post for 10 posts or until healed by a B-rank or higher medical technique.


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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   24th October 2013, 4:02 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   31st December 2013, 1:57 pm

Name: Chains of Eden (signature)
Classification: Fuinjutsu/Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: This technique was developed by Laxus to be used in conjunction with his bone garden(s).  Each plant out receives a seal, the seals release chains made of a mixture of chakra and blood which bind to the bijuu.  The bulk of chains also come from a similar seal on Laxus's palm, with each plant adding a chain to make the seal stronger and prohibit the Bijuu from moving.  Laxus will then place a seal with his other hand on an object or person (however he does not need to touch the object in question thanks to his Inkan heritage) and a final chain will spring forth, wrapping around the bulk Laxus holds in his hand.  This final chain will drag the others and the Bijuu that has been ensnared into this final seal, sealing it.  The technique can also be used to rip bijuu from Jinchuuriki as the chakra chains will pass into the host and forcibly rip the beast from the shinobi.  Depending on the number of plants he has out at the time, the strength of this technique increases (20 plants = S, 35 plants = SS, 50 plants = SSS).  The chains are as strong as and move at equal rank to whatever rank is equivalent to the number of plants on the field.  This technique can be paid for by chakra, blood, or a mixture of both.


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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   1st January 2014, 11:10 pm

there is no more S-SSS, this technique is actually solely S-rank, so the chakra/blood cost will only be S-rank. Yes the rank does increase but that is because of number of plants not more chakra or blood. You can have the chains initially move at S-rank but the more plants the faster the chains can move, 20 plants = S-rank speed, 35 plants = SS-rank speed, the same thing you already have

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   1st January 2014, 11:27 pm

Zen wrote:
there is no more S-SSS, this technique is actually solely S-rank, so the chakra/blood cost will only be S-rank. Yes the rank does increase but that is because of number of plants not more chakra or blood. You can have the chains initially move at S-rank but the more plants the faster the chains can move, 20 plants = S-rank speed, 35 plants = SS-rank speed, the same thing you already have

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   21st January 2014, 11:55 pm

Name: Chains of Eden: Original Sin
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Mid

Description: This technique is very similar to its original technique but deals with just people in general.  This technique allows the Chains of Eden to be attached to anyone, not just a bijuu or jinchuuriki.  Laxus can then seal the person/creature into a plant of his choosing.  Once this is done, the plant, and all plants of that type thus forward will have the sealed person/creature's chakra nature.  The plant type will get different effects depending on the chakra nature it possess and each plant type can only possess one chakra nature at a time.  The rank of the seal can range from C-S is determined to the number of plants on the field at the time, just like the original technique (10 plants = C, 20 plants = B, 30 Plants = A, 40 plants = S).  The chains will move at speeds equal to their rank at the time and can only be broken by unsealing fuinjutsu ranks a rank higher than what they are.  

Name: Nature's Scent
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C-rank (D-rank blood Cost)
Class: Supplementary
Range: AOE

Description: Laxus has found a way to forcibly alter the scent released from his sweat by mixing his nature release chakra within his body. The scent is released by expelling out bone cells from his body releasing a colorless aroma which spreads across the area filling it with the scent of roses.  ***Credit to Vix***

Name: Venus Fly Trap Bone Seed
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: This plant type requires a B-rank of blood to create, a B-rank to grow, and then an A-rank amount of blood to mature into a full plant.  These flowers stay below ground, moving about unseen on the battlefield.  At Laxus's discretion they will rise up at A-rank speeds to close around opponents, conforming to their body so their only form of escape is if they possess A-rank strength tiers or higher.  Upon being ensnared the fly traps will begin draining the target of a B-rank amount of blood, sending it to an Apple Bone Tree for storage which it is connected to.  Two venus fly traps can be connected to one tree at a time.   

Name: Venus Fly Trap Bone: Iron Maiden
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Offensive
Range: Close

Description: This is an advanced version of the Venus Fly Trap bone flower with the trap being colored red and black spikes protruding from the bulb.  The trap now moves at SS-rank speeds but can still be broken out of by A-rank strength.  However, upon being ensnared, the target will be impaled by the black bone spikes, dealing S-rank physical and spiritual damage to the target as well as taking an A-rank amount of blood from them immediately.  The plant will then release the target and return underground at SS-rank speeds to be used again.  

Name: Tulip Bone Lance
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Close

Description: Laxus will pick a fully bloomed Tulip Bone Flower and allow its roots and stalk to grow around his arm.  Once that is done the Tulip will sprout a point between its petals, creating a lance about five feet long.  The lance can pierce A-rank defensive techniques and deals C-rank physical damage upon impact.  However, the true use of this technique is that upon being impaled, the tip of the lance will break off in target and requires B-rank strength to fully remove.  While the tip is in the target, it will drain a B-rank of blood per their post until the target is dead.  

Name: Bone Spores
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Passive
Range: Varies

Description: This is an innate ability of all of Laxus's bone plants that he has caused them to develop.  Upon being destroyed, the plant will explode in a cloud of white spores that will cover an area according to what rank the plant is, with higher ranks covering a higher area.  Upon being inhaled, the spores will attack the central nervous system, causing paralysis in x amount of posts according to the destroyed plant's rank.  C-rank = 40 posts total, B-rank = 30, A-rank = 20, and S-rank = 10.  These stack as well, with each plant that's destroyed and has their spores inhaled decreasing the rank from the initial spore count by 5.  Once the counter is up, the person becomes completely immobilized unless healed by a medical technique specifically removing toxins/curing paralysis a rank above the initial spore rank that was inhaled.  

Name: Bug Buzz
Classification: Fabrication
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid

Description: Through the use of his Nature's Scent, Laxus induces this fabrication which causes the target to begin hearing hundreds of thousands of bugs buzzing all at once, even though they can't see any.  The sound itself is being generated by their mind and directly targets their ears, causing severe pain. The intensity grows with each passing post, forcing the target closer and closer to insanity and dealing B-rank mental and physical damage each post.  If they break out of the fabrication, they will be left deaf until healed by a B-rank medical technique or higher.  

Name: Red River
Classification: Fabrication
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Range: N/A

Description: Using his Nature's Scent, Laxus induces this fabrication technique which causes the target to see themselves standing in a river of blood and floating skeletons.  The skeletons will begin to rise out of the blood river and pull the target down towards it.  Once submerged they will begin to drown in the real world even though they aren't submerged.  After 3 posts they'll pass out, after 5 they'll die of suffocation because their brain is convinced it is drowning.

^^^ Need help with this one for dying/passing out posts and stuff ^^^

Name: Tenmetsu Style: Insect Repellent (signature)
Classification: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Close

Description: This is a kenjutsu technique of Laxus's own creation that involves him moving at fast speeds and thrusting his sword forward.  Upon the point touching the target, his green ants will let out a vibration that travels up the sword to the tip and releases a shockwave that sends opponents flying backwards fifty feet while dealing A-rank physical damage.  This technique can also be used to break incoming physical and chakra techniques in a solid state (wood, earth, life, etc. but not water, fire, wind, etc.)  

Name: Pine Bone Armor
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Using a fully matured Pine Bone Tree, Laxus pays a B-rank amount of blood to meld with it, allowing it to grow around him to form a suit of spiked armor.  The armor protects against S-rank techniques and Laxus has access to the pine cones, which act like any other projectile weapon, which deal A-rank damage.  If being attacked by a physical attack, or if anyone touches Laxus while encased in his armor, it will deal A-rank physical damage to them due to the prickly pines.  This technique lowers Laxus's speed by 1-rank while being used.  

Name: Bug Bite
Classification: Fabrication
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid

Description: Laxus uses his Nature's Scent to induce this fabrication which involves the target seeing millions of ants that will quickly climb all over them and begin biting their skin, leaving massive burning welts.  This technique deals B-rank mental and physical damage and is boosted to A-rank when used in conjunction with Bug Buzz.

Name: Blood Myrmecophyte
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary
Range: N/A

Description: Laxus has taught his ants to work together with his bone forest and keep it running properly.  Through this, he is able to pay the initial blood price to plant bone plant seeds but his ants will then take over and begin to nourish the seeds.  This takes away the blood prices to grow and then make the plant mature.  However, it takes 5 of Laxus's posts for the plant to grow and 5 more for it to mature.  

Name: Tenmetsu Style: Resonance (signature)
Classification: Kenjutsu/Genjutsu/Fabrication
Rank: S
Class: Defensive
Range: Varies

Description: Although Laxus's ants keep him protected from mental based techniques, he has found a way to turn sound based mental techniques back on their user, inducing them in the genjutsu instead.  By causing his weapon to vibrate in the same resonance as the sound waves coming from the genjutsu, he can swing the sword and send the same frequency back at the opponent.  This places them in their own genjutsu/fabrication.  He can do this up to S-rank mental techniques.


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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   23rd January 2014, 11:24 pm

Bump, done. Some of these I know for a fact will have to be edited, but more than anything I'm really looking for suggestions. Any who...let me know what you think/what needs fixing.
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   24th January 2014, 11:40 am

Original Sin – make it B-rank

Nature's Scent – I would suggest not saying that it can be used as a trigger for gen and fab. Nothing wrong with the tech but since in battle you don't have to outrightly tell the person they are in a genjutsu, this tech is throwing it out there that one is coming. And you can put in the gen/fab that they are triggered by the smell of roses. Be direct but not to direct.

Venus Fly Trap Bone Seed – B-rank blood to create, B-rank to grow, A-rank to full plant, that is all blood or is some chakra in there? Just need clarification. I'm not against the draining, but I think that blood drain cannot be sent over to Laxus unless him and the plant are connected. If they are connected then disregard what I said.. You can ask another mod bout this one though, if they think blood can be transferred its cool with me.

Iron Maiden – Approved

Tulip Bone Lance – Approved

Bone Spores – Approved

Bug Buzz – Only mental damage not physical

Red River – Gonna need some time on this one. If another mod has anything pls chime in.

Insect Repellent – the chakra blocking must have a physical form, like earth, water, and life. If another mod sees different, pls say so.

Pine Bone Armor – I can only give you protect against S-rank techs. Also the blood cost is B-rank rank.

Bug Bite – Approved

Blood Myrmecophyte – Approved

Resonance - Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   25th January 2014, 12:40 pm

Venus Fly Trap Bone Seed - Fixed so they have to be linked up to an Apple Bone Tree (which has the job of storing blood so it makes sense). Also it's all blood.

Red River - yeah I need advice on that, I'll talk to someone else for that one.

Bug Buzz - I thought fabrication dealt physical and mental damage? That's why I put physical, could be wrong though.

Insect Repellent - Changed it to only block physical techniques and chakra techniques in a solid state like earth and stuff.

The rest I changed as you said.
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   25th January 2014, 12:48 pm

Venus Fly Trap Bone Seed - Approved

Bug Buzz -No you are correct but in the Fab physical damage must be done. Like with Bug Bite, how the target is getting bitten yes that will cause physical damage. With Bug Buzz they are only hearing a sound, yes its annoying but I don't see the physical damage coming from it. Now if you want, since its sound directly target their ears for physical damage and I can allow that.

Insect Repellent - Approved

All others Approved excluding Red River until it has been talked over.
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   25th January 2014, 1:10 pm

Fixed Bug Buzz so now it targets the ears, thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   25th January 2014, 1:58 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   26th January 2014, 2:26 am

5 posts (total) for them to pass out unless they can hold their breath for longer than that, 10 posts (total) for them to drown unless they can hold their breath for longer than that. Raise it to S-rank.

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   29th January 2014, 11:26 am

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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   29th January 2014, 11:50 am

Name: Chimera Ant Burrowing
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Offensive
Range: Varies

Description: Laxus will let out several Black Chimera Ants that will proceed to crawl on an opponent and burrow into their skin.  Once there they will attach to chakra points in their body and begin feeding, draining an A-rank amount of chakra per post.  Five posts later they will rip through the target's body, ten times their original size due to the chakra feeding.  This will most likely kill the target and bypasses defense tiers as they are emerging from within the body.  

Name: Black Dragon Breath
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid

Description: Laxus will direct Black Chimera Ants into his mouth which will then begin releasing their blaze release chakra.  Exhaling, Laxus will let loose a gout of blaze release flames that deal B-rank damage and leave burns that deal D-rank damage per post until treated by a healing technique B-rank or above.  These flames cannot be put out by water like normal flames.  

***For these next three techniques I need help with the sizes because I don't know the size of Bijuu.  Also Vix, if you could help me truly Vixify them that would be much obliged.  I'll take any suggestions because I want these to be the pinnacle of Laxus's arsenal.***

Name: Bone Forest: Wood Dragon Technique *signature*
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: SS
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: Laxus channels an SS-rank amount of blood and an S-rank amount of chakra into his garden before a massive bone white wooden dragon erupts from the ground, coiling itself around him.  The beast is large enough to be able to constrict a Large(XL) creature, however it can shrink and contort to be able to constrict smaller beasts as well, but no larger.  Each post the creature is coiled around something, it takes an SS-rank amount of chakra from the target.  The Dragon moves at SS-rank speeds and can survive SS-rank techniques, only being destroyed by SSS-rank or higher.  The exception to this is chakra techniques, which it will simply absorb, regardless of rank.  

Name: Bone Forest: Enlightened Human Technique *signature*
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: SS
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: Laxus channels an SS-rank amount of blood and an S-rank amount of chakra into his garden before a massive white wooden oni-looking humanoid erupts from the ground.  The oni is on par with a Large (XL) creature, easily able to fight a Bijuu.  If Bone Forest: Wood Dragon Technique is in use when this technique is used, then the dragon will wrap itself around the oni's body, acting as a third arm.  When the two are combined, they become an SSS-rank technique with their tiers and chakra absorption ability raising as well.  The Oni is very similar to the Wooden Dragon in the fact that it can directly absorb chakra simply by touching something, draining an SS-rank per post.  For smaller targets it can launch small protrusions from its body to constrict individual targets and begin draining.  It moves at SS-rank speed, hits with SS-rank strength and can only be destroyed by an SSS-rank technique.  Like the dragon, chakra techniques have no effect on it as they will simply be absorbed and negated.  

Name: Bone Forest: True Several Hands Buddha *signature*
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: SSS
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: This technique has a 5 post (total) set up and during those 5 posts, an 5 S-ranks worth of blood must be paid.  On the final post, an SS-rank worth of chakra is used to bring the creation to life. The buddha dwarfs all others around it, including bijuu with its titanic size.  The statue is stationary once brought about, however its thousand hands can freely be moved by Laxus's will, allowing it to strike foes at SSS-rank speed with SSS-rank strength.  The statue can grab hold of creatures and people, draining SSS-rank chakra per post or it can begin draining chakra directly from anything in the area (20 foot radius around it), though this is only an S-rank amount per post and the statue cannot attack while doing so as it takes a meditative stance with its thousand hands.  The statue takes a Z-rank to destroy, anything below SSS-rank has no effect on it.  Like the dragon and oni, chakra techniques have no effect on it as they will simply be absorbed and negated.  This is the pinnacle of Laxus's arsenal and is only used in the most dire of circumstances.  

Name: Bone Forest: Tenth Edict On Enlightenment *signature*
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank:S-rank
Class:Offensive
Range: All

Description: This is Laxus's take on the Wood Release: Tenth Edict on Enlightenment technique and requires an S-rank amount of blood to use.  By forcing pillars of bone to rise out of the ground, this technique utilizes the power of Laxus's Bone Forest to forcibly suppress a tailed beast's chakra. To invoke this technique, it is necessary for the tailed beast or Jinchuriki to be at its peak 7 tails or below as 8 tails and above can not be restrained with this particular technique. The user would produce the seal "sit" on their palm, and then by touching the tailed beast's chakra with their hand, the user then suppresses the chakra inside an area lined with ten or eleven wooden pillars. The tailed beast will obey and sit before calming down and after 10 posts total will fall asleep. On the other hand with Jinchuriki will sit before the chakra is pushed back into their seal leaving them unable to summon their bijuu tailed cloak for the rest of the topic and causing them the Jinchuriki to pass out.  If in Version 2 form, then the beast's chakra is suppressed, but they stay conscious.  Instead they cannot enter their tailed beast mode for the remainder of the topic.  

Name: Bone Forest: Eleventh Edict On Enlightenment *signature*
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank:SS-rank
Class:Offensive
Range: All

Description: This is Laxus's take on the Wood Release: Eleventh Edict on Enlightenment technique and requires an SS-rank amount of blood to use.  By forcing pillars of bone to rise out of the ground, this technique utilizes the power of Laxus's Bone Forest to forcibly suppress a tailed beast's chakra. To invoke this technique, it is necessary for the tailed beast or Jinchuriki to be at its peak 8 tails or below as 9 tails and above can not be restrained with this particular technique. The user would produce the seal "sit" on their palm, and then by touching the tailed beast's chakra with their hand, the user then suppresses the chakra inside an area lined with eleven or twelve wooden pillars. The tailed beast will obey and sit before calming down and after 15 posts total will fall asleep. On the other hand with Jinchuriki will sit before the chakra is pushed back into their seal leaving them unable to summon their bijuu tailed cloak for the rest of the topic and the Jinchuriki will pass out. If in Version 2 form, then the beast's chakra is suppressed, but they stay conscious. Instead they cannot enter their tailed beast mode for the remainder of the topic.

Name: Bone Forest: Twelfth Edict On Enlightenment *signature*
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: SSS-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: All

Description: This is Laxus's take on the Wood Release: Twelfth Edict on Enlightenment technique and requires an SSS-rank amount of blood to use.  By forcing pillars of bone to rise out of the ground, this technique utilizes the power of Laxus's Bone Forest to forcibly suppress a tailed beast's chakra. To invoke this technique, it is necessary for the tailed beast or Jinchuriki to be at its peak 9 tails or below as the 10 tails can not be restrained with this particular technique. The user would produce the seal "sit" on their palm, and then by touching the tailed beast's chakra with their hand, the user then suppresses the chakra inside an area lined with ten or eleven wooden pillars. The tailed beast will obey and sit before calming down and after 20 posts total will fall asleep. On the other hand with Jinchuriki will sit before the chakra is pushed back into their seal leaving them unable to summon their bijuu tailed cloak for the rest of the topic and the Jinchuriki will pass out. If in Version 2 form, then the beast's chakra is suppressed, but they stay conscious. Instead they cannot enter their tailed beast mode for the remainder of the topic.


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PostSubject: Re: Laxus's Techniques WIP   1st February 2014, 2:34 pm

Dragon, Oni, Bhudda. I'm fine with the techniques however the costs will be as follows.

Dragon - SS-rank Blood Price, S-rank chakra price.
Oni - SS-rank Blood Price, S-rank chakra price.
Bhudda - Set up time 5 posts (total) within those five posts 5 counts of S-rank Blood must be paid to continue the construction while 1 SS-rank chakra price must be added on the final post to bring it to life. Also give me a radius for the chakra drain, like it can't be the whole area but I can have it be a 20 feet radius around the statue which is already a pretty massive distance.

Enlightenment have equal rank blood price costs also.

Make it Version 1 it's repressed into the Jinchuriki's body and they fall asleep, Version 2 it's repressed and they can't go into tailed beast mode for the rest of the topic.

Any one have conflicting thoughts let me know.

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