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PostSubject: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 8:57 pm

Name:Life Release: Creation of the Beast
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank:A-rank
Class:Offensive,Supplementary
Range: All ranges

Description:The kurogane pulls out a bone,making it the shape of a ball, from their body and sticks it in their gourd. After a set within the gourd the kurogane would remove the bone ball and keeps it held in his hand. The ball grows a spike and sticks out into the kurogane's hand,taking C-rank amount of blood and B-rank amount of chakra. After the C-rank amount of blood and B-rank amount of chakra is fused into the bone it is  thrown to the ground and after a set amount of time  to let grow it turns into a Bone replica of the Kurogane's Animal Spirit and is then directed to attack an intended target.When the ball was within the gourd it absorbed C-rank amount of blood and then when in the Kurgane's hand absorbed C-rank amount of blood the Kurogane and B-rank amount of chakra from the User is used to change the Bone. The construct moves at A-rank speeds. Fights with A-rank strength,and has A-rank endurance. While the size of the construct is the same as a Medium sized creature. Time it takes for it to fully form is 10 posts. Time in Gourd 2 posts. Total-12 posts

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 9:02 pm

Add posts (total) and I'll approve it, or you can just leave it as is except it'll take a lot longer to form.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 9:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 9:08 pm

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 9:58 pm

Name:Life Release: Impaling Spikes
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank:B-rank (D-B rank chakra cost)
Class:Offensive
Range:Short-Mid

Description: This technique is an add on to the Dance of Larch in which chakra in swirled around the roots of the bone within the user's skeleton. By paying chakra the user is able to launch the bone spikes at varying speeds capping out at crashing ground. Due to bones sprouting all around the user's body it is hard to determine exactly which bone is going to be launched which plays into the versatility of this technique.

Name:Life Release: Smothering Bind
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank:B-rank
Class:Offensive,Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid

Description: The user sprouts a bone from his palm before impaling the ground causing roots of bone to rapidly emerge and head toward the opponent at crashing ground speeds. Upon reaching them they burst out of the ground and ensnare the target requiring inhuman strength to break free however being able to scale with Dead Bone Pulse to require higher degrees of strength.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 10:09 pm

Impaling Strikes um... I'm confused are you growing bones and launching them. Because if you are then just learn Dance of the Larch and then make this technique an add on to launch the bones created by that technique at crashing ground speeds.

Smothering bind it's speed should be Crashing Ground also include the strength tiers required to break free of the bone branches.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 10:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   11th February 2014, 11:03 pm

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   12th February 2014, 9:11 am

Name:Life release: Savior's Lantern (Sig)
Classification: Kinjutsu/Barrier Ninjutsu
Rank:S-SS rank (Chakra Price Varies)
Class:Offensive, Supplementary
Range:All ranges

Description: Taishoku removes two of his rib bones the one's closest to his heart before dropping him in his Kurogane Gourd over a period of time (10 posts total) the bones absorb the blood within consuming an A-rank amount of blood during this time. Taishoku then pulls out the bone's from the gourd one resembling a tiny statue of himself the other a lantern, he then throws the lantern on the ground while making hand seals to infuse chakra into it. Depending on the amount of chakra infused it can either have an additional delay of 5 posts (total) or it can form immediately after his post into a massive bone statue identical to his Kurogane Beast.

Version One - The statue grows to Large (L) size for the price of 1 A-rank of chakra while the latern grows to Large (M) size for the prise of 1 A-rank of chakra as well totaling for an S-rank amount of chakra. The Statue has S-rank strength tiers and A-rank speed tiers while it's durability is constant with Taishoku's Dead Bone Pulse.

The Lantern can act as a prison or a make shift shield being able to block S-rank techniques as long as they are not spiritual or have S-rank defense piercing while a SS-rank chakra, mental or physical based technique will shatter it from either side.

Version Two - The statue grows to Large (L) size for the price of 1 S-rank of chakra while the latern grows to Large (M) size for the price of 1 S-rank of chakra as well totaling for an SS-rank amount of chakra. The Statue has SS-rank strength tiers and S-rank speed tiers while it's durability is constant with Taishoku's Dead Bone Pulse.

The Lantern can act as a prison or a make shift shield being able to block SS-rank techniques as long as they are not spiritual or have SS-rank defense piercing while a SSS-rank chakra, mental or physical based technique will shatter it from either side.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   13th February 2014, 7:08 pm

Um you would have to determine the size honestly. Like if you want it to be an S-rank then the statue will probably be Large (M)

It would need like 1 S-rank of blood and an SS-rank to be Large (L) and 1 SS-rank of Blood and a SSS-rank to be Large (XL)

If you wanted bigger than it would most likely have a delay of 20 posts (total) to form.

The technique is rough I would prefer if it was written neater but as long as you include the first thing you can keep it at S-rank and I'll just edit it so it's nice and neat when I approve it. Good tech though by the way.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   13th February 2014, 7:26 pm

Okay I added that part

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   13th February 2014, 7:58 pm

Approved and fixed up.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   8th March 2014, 1:09 pm

Name:Water Release: Water Mirror Technique
Classification:Ninjutsu
Rank:A-rank
Class:Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short-range

Description:The user creates a large, flat, circular pool of water in front of their opponent. Its surface acts like a mirror, perfectly reflecting the attacking targets. By then hooking onto and rotating the 'mirror' 90° with their weapon, the reflections emerge and materialize from the mirror, where they collide with the mirrored targets. As these reflections use the exact same technique as their counterpart — regardless of its type — they counter the attack completely, while repelling them in the process. However, upon impact, the reflections disperse into water. For this technique to be used the users must have a near by water source. But in some cases it cannot reflect some techniques such as one's bigger then the mirror or techniques above A-rank.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   8th March 2014, 10:41 pm

As long as you are aware of its limitations then approved

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   21st March 2014, 6:43 pm

Name:Life release: Madman's Head
Classification:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Class: Defensive
Range:Self

Description: Using Life release, the user creates a dome-like defensive structure that completely surrounds which takes the form of their animal spirits face or just a regular human skull. This defense is split down the middle and can be opened on the user's command. The purpose of this is to have a quick defense come from the users body and protect them, and keep them completely surrounded. The speed in witch it covers the kurogane's body varies from how much chakra is used.So depending on the chakra used it could  move at A-rank speeds ,S-rank, SS-rank speeds. NO matter the chakra used it's durability stays constant with the user's Dead Bone Pulse. It defends against physical, chakra and hybrid based techniques. The amount it can take is one A-rank if A-rank chakra is used, One S-rank if S-rank chakra was used, and one SS-rank if SS-rank chara is used.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   21st March 2014, 10:45 pm

the speed in which it forms is S-rank, not equal to your speed

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   21st March 2014, 11:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   22nd March 2014, 9:49 am

Zzzz no need to um say that it costs S-rank chakra. Instead you should specify what exactly it blocks otherwise it would just be assumed it blocked only chakra based techniques. My suggestion would be to say physical, chakra and hybrid based techniques equal to it which do not have piercing and has the same durability as Taishoku's dead bone pulse.

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   25th March 2014, 8:48 pm

I edited it

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   25th March 2014, 11:25 pm

rank is only A-rank, but Approved
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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   8th April 2014, 4:33 pm

Name: Flesh Release: Matter World
Classification: Ninjutsu/Combination Jutsu
Rank: S Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: The Kurogane clan member infuses their own flesh with the ground, becoming aware of all within a 150 ft radius that come in contact with it. Through this they can create eyes, ears, or mouths within the entire area for quick communication or spying.

If with Blood Release: Shallow Grave is used after Flesh Release: Matter World, both of their ranges are increased to a 300 ft radius. Blood Release: Shallow Grave will now lower the speed of physical objects by 1 rank and things with a source of chakra by 2 ranks. Blood Release: Shallow Grave's Chakra Cost is increased by 1 Rank.

If Life Release: Growing Pains is used after Flesh Release: Matter World then its tiers are increased by a 1 rank.

Name: Blood Release: Sinking Grave
Classification: Ninjutsu/Combination Jutsu
Rank: A Rank
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: This jutsu covers the ground in a thin, yet slick layer of blood within a 100 ft radius from the user. The blood/chakra clings on any chakra source that comes in contact with it that is not the user's and slows it down by 1 Tier of Speed.

Name: Flesh Release: Dragon Wings
Classification: Taijutsu/KG(Ninjutsu for Taishoku)
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary/Passive
Range: Self

Description: By combining is clan's Tota, Flesh Release, with his animal spirit, Tetsu manipulates his bodies structure and causes his body to form new appendages.(Since this isn't Taishoku's animal spirit he needs chakra to form these wings.) Bones sprout from his back that then grow muscle sinew and blood vessels. Then skin surrounds them forming a pair of flesh wings in the shape of a dragons that extend to a fourteen foot wingspan. These wings allow Taishoku fly the speed in which he moves is equal to his current strength tier.

Name: Fire Release: Will of Fire
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: AoE

Description: The user creates hand seals and then places their hand on the ground, focuses their fire release jutsu into the ground. The fire release chakra then spreads out along the surface of the solid ground before igniting itself, becoming a sea of flames two feet high off the ground. The color of these flames are different depending on the person who uses this jutsu. The flames are ore ethereal as they do absolutely no damage to those within the area, but instead power them up. All Fire Release jutsu used while in the flames have their power is increased by 1 Rank. All Fire Release jutsu used while this is in effect become a color dependent on the Fire Release user's will. Meaning though this jutsu may produce blue flames, other's fire release jutsu could be purple or green.


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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   12th April 2014, 1:11 am

Flesh Release: Matter World - This will cost them D rank Chakra. ← I'm guessing that is every post to keep active which it will be C-rank chakra per post. Change meters to feet.

If Life Release: Growing Pains is used after Flesh Release: Matter World then its tiers are increased by a 1 rank and has its chakra cost lowered by 1 Rank. ← no chakra cost lowering

Now Matter World is one jutsu, and that large jutsu order part is a separate technique.

Sinking Grave – change meters into ft

Dragon Wings – No more C-S, this is B-rank. Flight speed is equal to your strength

Will of Fire – No decreasing chakra cost

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   15th April 2014, 6:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   15th April 2014, 10:57 pm

Sinking Grave – make it 100ft

Dragon Wings – Approved

Will of Fire – only power increase

Matter World – The changes were made, however [If the jutsu are used in order of Flesh Release: Matter World, Blood Release: Shallow Grave and then Life Release: Growing Pains] ← here and down is a separate jutsu.

The 164ft change to 150ft, the 328ft change to 300ft

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PostSubject: Re: A Kurogane's Creation   16th April 2014, 3:27 pm

Edited and here is the jutsu for combining all three



Name: Flesh Release: Matter World V2
Classification: Ninjutsu/Combination Jutsu
Rank:  B Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description:If the jutsu are used in order of Flesh Release: Matter World, Blood Release: Shallow Grave and then Life Release: Growing Pains then the world within this ranged is changed into actual flesh, blood and bone. Trees become bones with blood dripping from its branches, the earth becomes actual flesh. Blood Release: Shallow Grave drops the speed of chakra sources and physical objects by 2 ranks, Life Release: Growing Pains' tiers are increased by 2 Ranks and the total range is a 300 ft radius. The world actually transforms as the user travels, being the epicenter. The user is capable of knowing all that is within their range and can create eyes, ears or mouths within this range in order to spy or communicate long distances. In order to obtain this, the user must pay an extra cost of B rank chakra for the total fusion of the three jutsu.
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