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PostSubject: Gravity heir    23rd August 2016, 7:59 pm

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning tremor
Classification: Ninjutsu 
Rank: D
Class: Offense
Range: Contact

Description: This technique is one that Kenichi is very fond of and has nearly mastered in it's use. The user begins by channeling their Lightning Release chakra into the palm of their hand, enwreathing it in crackling lightning. Once this is done, the user is able to charge at their enemy and strike them with said hand. Upon striking the enemy, the lightning courses through their body to cause the victim's muscles to seize and lock up. This paralysis lasts for a total of 4 posts (total) before it wears off. Enemies with D-Rank Endurance tiers are able to resist this paralysis.

Name: Gravity Release: Defined Gravity
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: AOE

Description: The user performs a string of hand seals before placing their hands on the ground, coursing their Gravity Release chakra into the ground. This creates an area with an 80ft radius where the gravity is strengthened. The Gravity holds all those upon the ground down with C-Rank strength, requiring equal strength in order to jump. This also slows those within the area, everyone's speed suffering a 1-Rank drop. Those in the air get pulled down with C-Rank strength, to hit the ground for a C-Rank of physical damage. Those with C-Rank Defense tiers can mitigate the fall damage, and those with a C-Rank Strength tier as well as a C-Rank or above aerial movement techniques are able to stay in the air.

Name: Gravity Release: Chakra Orbs
Classification:  ninjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: The user performs several hand seals before forming several black orbs of chakra that float at their black. These orbs have multiple purposes, and are therefore invaluable to the user. The first use of these orbs are as a chakra storage device. Each orb is able to hold up to a B-Rank of Kenichi's chakra within them, and can return to his body upon command in order to replenish his reserves. When they return, there is a set cooldown depending upon his rank before another orb can be created. These orbs can also change shape in order to become weapons for Kenichi's use. In order to use the weapon forms of these orbs, Kenichi must first go through a training in order to learn the shape. Each shape also takes up a D-Rank technique slot. These orbs also possess the ability to be used as a gravity well, exerting a gravitational force in an area around them, though at the cost of the chakra within the orbs. The force, range and duration that the gravitational fields can be held is dependent upon the amount of chakra used to initiate the effect.
User Rank - Max Orbs - Weapon Shape - In Battle WC Req. (Solo Training)
D - 1 - Projectile - 100 (50)
C - 2 - Shield - 200 (100)
B - 3 - Blunt Melee - 400 (200)
A - 4 - Bladed Melee - 600 (400)
S - 5 - Piercing Melee - 800 (600)
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Chakra Used - Area of Gravity Field (ft) - Strength of Gravity - Duration (P.T.)
D - 40 - D - 6
C - 80 - C - 3
B - 120 - B - 1

User Rank - Orb Cooldown
D - 6
C - 5
B - 4
A - 3
S - 2

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    25th August 2016, 2:51 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    28th September 2016, 2:37 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    5th October 2016, 10:43 am

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Repulsive Core - Change Endurance in the first chart to Rank.

Rigorous Training
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Touch Enhancement -
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Use this Chart for GA -
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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    19th February 2017, 6:32 am

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    19th February 2017, 12:21 pm

Rigorous Training Unapproved.

Sorry, this is my fault. I made those techs before I knew that tier chains have to be apart of a fighting style.

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    23rd February 2017, 3:02 pm

The changes have been made, so I'm assuming that there's nothing else I need to fix so I'll put them to my characterS techniques

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    23rd February 2017, 3:05 pm

Yep, all approved now

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    27th February 2017, 2:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    3rd April 2017, 6:23 pm

Lightning Arc - 3 D of materia at least per arc, 3 D of chakra as well if you want to keep the paralysis effect. Either way, moves at C-Rank speeds, deals C-Rank chakra based damage per arc. Paralysis is negated by C-Rank endurance or D-Rank chakra tiers and lasts for 4 PT otherwise.

Shockwave - Deals C-Rank damage each round to anyone in the area of effect, have your rank determine the range (10 feet radius at D, 15 at C, 20 at B, etc). Outside the halfway mark it causes a one rank loss in speed unless the victim possesses D-Rank endurance. Within the halfway mark it causes paralysis in a limb unless the victim possesses C-Rank endurance for 4 PT, if making contact with Kenichi it causes total paralysis for 2 PT unless the victim possesses C-Rank endurance. This will also take the price every round it is active.

Gauntlet - You have worded it terribly. If anything, just have it increase the range of your Gravitas Markings and that's it. You'll need to reword this entire tech.

Harsh Dive - Is fine, but it should be *Unaffected, not unexpected in the last line.

Elevator Kick - No. The first kick will go up at C-Rank speeds, causing the victim to instinctively protect their head unless they possess C-Rank barrier tiers. If successful, the next kick will require C-Rank reaction tiers in order to notice and avoid.

Levitate - When levitating an unwilling target, it can be negated with C-Rank Endurance tiers or B-Rank strength tiers to break the gravitic hold. Also, duration will be 1-5 rounds before a new price needs to be paid.

Light Body - Payment needs to be given every round. It does not last a duration, that's not how Pseudo Tiers work unfortunately. So it's either a chakra price every PT or a chakra price and a fatigue price every round.

Area Stop - Ninjutsu first of all. Second of all, there's no reason for it to disable chakra based techniques. So you'll need to change this. Make it an AoE that slows opponents by one rank unless they possess C-Rank strength as well to push through the gravitic field.

Certain Spot - Will pull solid objects moving at C-Rank speeds or slower that aren't backed by strength of C-Rank or higher towards the point at C-Rank speeds. Will not draw chakra based techniques unless they are Solid in composition.

Assist Pillars - Can take up to B-Rank damage(stacking) before being destroyed. Victim requires B-Rank Strength, B-Rank speed or C-Rank Speed and Strength to break the hold.

Object Orbit - C-Rank speeds that aren't backed by strength.

Blood 4 Materia - Change the name, please. Blood to Lightning would be fine, Sparking Vitae would work. Also, it would generate materia in a 1:2 ratio meaning that 1 D-Rank of Blood would generate 2 D-Ranks of Lightning Release materia. It would do this for a number of rounds depending on your rank, not your endurance tiers. If it was tier based it'd be Spirit. So it'll be 1 round at D-Rank to 5 rounds at S-Rank.

1st Lunge - Requires barrier tiers one rank below the speed of the spin. Upon attack it requires reaction tiers one below the speed or speed one tier level higher, this effect only comes into play if they are caught in looking at the spin of course.

2nd Slash - Costs 2 additional fatigue each time it's used.

Intense Combat - Erojutsu/Taijutsu first of all. Second, you didn't put any specifications as to what counts for the fight. Third those bonuses are dumb, no you'll need to come up with others. Or just learn Masochism.

Thunder Punch - Nintaijutsu. Reaction tier check one rank below the speed of the punch, deals additional lightning release damage equal to the chakra put in. Also, paralysis lasts for 2 PT unless negated by C-Rank or higher endurance tiers.

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    4th April 2017, 1:49 am

Blood to lightning: will that mean I can only give a D-rank of blood.

Also all done. Ready for a second inspect.

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    4th April 2017, 11:12 am

All but Gauntlets approved, make sure to delete it.

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    4th April 2017, 11:14 am

Done, thank you blade.

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    27th July 2017, 10:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gravity heir    26th August 2017, 2:51 pm

Certain spot: Change to Ninjutsu, since the kunai/shuriken are just a medium for the actual technique. Also keep in mind you'd chakra conductive metals in your weapons to make this work.

assist Pillars: B rank

Object Orbit: Same as certain spot

Electro-Tracking: Exactly what materia is being used?

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